Seventh and final chapter of In the Wrong Hands.
The two superwoman come face-to-face and battle it out against each other. There’s only room for one superheroine – who will it be?!
Seventh and final chapter of In the Wrong Hands.
The two superwoman come face-to-face and battle it out against each other. There’s only room for one superheroine – who will it be?!
amazing fight between two godess…awesome…strenght…powers..and a hard fight…too bad sonic girl power faded out so quickly..it could be real fun to see wonder babe give all she had to beat her opponent..in a memorable catfight…but if the future story stay in that stateof mind…you have all my attention..keep it up..
forget to mention duplicate photo in the first chapter i think..
Jon…..here’s a story u could use for ur next video….please please please….Have Anastasiya as Sonic Girl (love that costume on her) she’s shopping in a store after she got off work from the office….while she’s shopping the place is getting robbed….. she wastes no time and transform into her sonic girl costume and helps evryone shopping out the back and ……well from there Jon u can come up with the rest…..Transformation by ripping her shirt….strength ….flight…..u can make this video the best!!!!……by the way this photostory is the best one yet….they keep getting better and better 🙂
Well, to be honest mate … you spent 6 chapters on the simple idea of how she became “super”, and then one chapter essentially on a fight? Then she just loses her powers? And the Wonder Babe just wasn’t very …super looking…and the wonder costume….no go either.
I know you can do better Jon, thanks for the effort, hang in there 🙂
i agree a little with michael..you could focus on the heroine fight…instead of the assistant discovering her power…it could be resume in one chapter..also the first encounter between wonder babe and sonic girl must see the defeat of wonder babe…overpowered and knocked then capture by the evil duo…then she find a way to escape and bring payback…
even with her super strength heat vision and invulnerability the evil godess could’nt take advantage on a heroine who need her belt to have her powers who is bullet proof with her bracelets on..not without…and can be knocked out in a fight …look like even heat vision dont affect her a lot…….you forgot to input some suspense in this story..a good job…but can be better…
I canceled my membership not too long ago but I gotta say that punch in the picture looks frickin awesome. I can almost hear the sound of the SMACK that it would make. My compliments to whoever set that shot up.
The story was alright and both models were top notch. However, the Wonder Babe costume was what I liked the most. Definately my favorite of all the costumes you’ve used especially if it’s worn by someone who looks good in it as was the case here.
Jon,
Gotta say, some of these photos were really, really excellent. Looks like you took some time to get some dramatic poses, with the hair flying, and dramatic body language. Your villain definitely has an expressive face, and I hope you use her again. As far as the script issues are concerned, are you still asking for script/story submissions? Basically, rather than complain, I’ll just ask if I can help.
BTW, looking forward to seeing updates on the other sites, especially the one that asks for monthly fees and hasn’t delivered an update in several weeks. The pay-per-story sites can take a lower priority, since no one is getting fleeced when there are no updates.
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