The Waitress, chapter 2

Not sure what happened! I planned for the second chapter of Argonaut’s The Waitress to go live on Monday, but it was scheduled for next Monday – odd.

Sorry about that y’all.

So anyway, here is the second and final chapter of The Waitress, written by Argonaut. I loved this story concept and my question would be:

“What do you guys think of the superheroine displaying her superpowers, but NOT in her superheroine costume?”

I rather like it. The superheroine going about her daily life, and then having to deal with some thug. Imagine the power she must feel as she just discards him in just her sexy little Hooters outfit!…. oops… I’m getting carried away!

Hope you like it!

Super Hooters Waitress

12 thoughts on “The Waitress, chapter 2

  1. I love superheroines who do not have a dedicated costume!

    This is how the bionic heroine should have been portrayed!

  2. I really liked this girl, she battered my mate good and proper there, he plays a good thug does our Patrick, if the band makes another video we now want him in it.
    I love his facial expressions firstly when he’s being all bad, then when the game is up and he can’t win, his feeble attempts at begging these lovely superhero ladies not to hurt him, simple brilliant, great performances are expected in the future from you all.

  3. I have to say I find the no costume thing a bit boring and dissapointing we need more transformations from bespectacled wimp into super sexy and powerful heroine 🙂 but I agree variety is good and as the first post demonstrates there is a market there but its not for me.

  4. a second chapter for rude interruption or a comics with midnight the sexy heroine in blue costume..would be cool…
    think about it…

  5. The outfit was okay with me, better than some of the costumes. Costumes are fine, but who’s wearing them and what they do in them in the storyline is more important.

  6. I agree with Ben…definitely would prefer a transformation from “bespectacled wimp into super sexy and powerful heroine.”

    But for a short two part comic this wasn’t bad

  7. Very hot superheroine and I liked the Hooters outfit idea for a change of pace. Like Steve aluded to…maybe she is bionic. But if she is a supergirl-type, bring her back but as her alter ego in full costume. Have her change out of her Hooters outfit into her Supergirl digs and really tear it up with her powers. Maybe on her way out of work there could be some thugs hassling a bar patron and she could jump into action. Bending their weapon (a gun, knife, or leadpipe), lifting up their car when they try to drive off, or maybe kicking a hole in their tire as they start up the car. I’m not trying to tell you what to do but I guess I’d like to see more action other than just lifting up guys and chucking them across rooms.

  8. In or out of uniform works fine for me. It helps that the heroine in this peice gorgeous.

  9. I agree with John, some new special effects would be great to see. Even something as mundane as seeing SuperHooterGirl hover up to the ceiling to dust some fan blades or change a light bulb.

  10. Have to agree with everything Ben said. It didn’t really do it for me at all. Sorry to be negative 🙁

    Having it spread out over 3 weeks was a bit of an extra disappointment. Any chance of a double-update sometime soon to make up for the missed week? 😉

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