Second and final chapter of Unknown Protector. Again, thanks to DF Fan for his brilliant illustration and storytelling.
Superior Girl teases the intruder by displaying her vast, vast superiority over him. Heat vision, invulnerability, incredible strength in picking up the big man and bending his steel bar.
God she’s a great looking Supergirl!
Agreed. Not only is she beautiful, but she carries herself the way I imagine a super-heroine would.
I’m a Sherlock Holmes fan, and the ending of this story reminded me of the ending of “The Blue Carbuncle,” where Holmes lets the thief go. And coincidentally (?) “The Blue Carbuncle” takes place two days after Christmas — the same day this story was posted!
Looking forward to more great stories in 2010!
Like the story, been awhile though since we had a story were the heroine was endangered, I agree with argonaut the lady carries herself as a heroine, would perfer if she had the red cape with her uniform. Maybe a story line with her playing Supergirl or Power Woman were she gets captured by falling in some villians unsuspecting trap and she gets wrapped up in kryptonite chains, she finds away to counter the kryptonite and snaps free of the chains and goes on to dominate the villian capturing him or her
I love the site because it’s rather tasteful compared to the other sites around the net involving super heroines and I love how the stories are presented in comic book form. With that said, I have to agree with what Matt said. It’s been awhile since a heroine has run into any real danger.
These last couple of comics have been really stale storywise. You lack conflict.
Conflict is great for storytelling and really helps flesh out the hero’s journey. Your story beats have been like this so far; The heroine is bad ass, the heroine is badass, the heroine is badass, and the heroine wins. Pretty boring!!! Have the heroine face a foe as powerful as her, have her powers taken away (of course she gets them back in the end), have her fall into a trap, have her arrogance get her into trouble. YOU NEED CONFLICT!!! Something similar to the Miss Power: Spectra story.
Other than that, don’t change a thing.
matt just have a good story plot…even superheroines can encounter troubles..maybe wonder babe will be depowered without her belt or costume and must find a way out to free from ropes with her amazon abilities..and her mind…
to finally defeat a gang of bank robber who trapped her in the bank chest..with the ultimatum of diying without air supply…
by bank chest i mean vault…sorry…lol