Reluctant Criminal, chapter 1

Hey Guys, new comic book starts this week.

Last Thursday I posted a blog at:
https://www.superheroines.net/blog/blog/2010/12/next-comic-you-write-the-story/

Telling readers that I had one male actor and two female models lined up. I described the location, and said I had the full array of props and superheroine costumes available.

I asked readers of the blog to send over a comic book story that they’d like to have made into a comic book based on those specifications.

Lots of readers sent over stories. Some more do-able than others, but as always I was very grateful for the time and effort people went into sending over summaries, scripts, and even illustrations.

In the end I chose a story by a guy called Paul (he doesn’t want his surname to be used, and he’s already been informed that it was used). The story was short, succinct, and we had a blast making it.

It was the first time I shot a story based on a script I’d only received over the weekend. Took a little bit of prep, but thoroughly enjoyable.

As I said on the blog, if fans want to see their story idea turned into a comic book or film just drop me a note via this URL:

https://www.superheroines.net/blog/submit

Anyhow, the new story features the very sexy Karolina (and another superheroine yet to enter the story). I’m sure you’ll agree that she looks stunning.

Again, thanks to Paul for the story.

sexy college girl superheroine

12 thoughts on “Reluctant Criminal, chapter 1

  1. will this so sexy student girl turns out to be a bad ass super babe?
    or wil she join the fight against crime with the appearence of the super sexy heroine… ? good story paul…hang up for the next chapter

  2. Actually, although the site hasn’t been updated to reflect it, it looks like the movie is available if you search on payloadz. The title and description at least make it sound very similar to one that’s already been done (this one is Danica as Power Woman, as a result of her boyfriend’s birthday wish), so I probably won’t be buying it unless the site gives more info that shows there’s some action, drama, etc.

  3. Patches and Jose, so what if it wasn’t ready for purchase on the 16th! You didn’t lose any money. It isn’t like he stole something from you. Just missed the date due to normal life issues likely. Maybe the weather, maybe his computer crapped out, maybe a hangover. Patiently wait and see.

  4. i see the movie is up looks like yet another “supermodel is a superheroine” lets here from anyone who buys this i for one pass

  5. I’ve just deleted Patches and Jose’s comments. They are completely unrelated to this post.

    I’ve also emailed both Patches and Jose asking them to email me directly with any comments they have, either about the websites, the updates or my integrity.

    I’m all for open discussion on my blog, but I draw the line at some of the comments that came from them. Communicate with me directly.

  6. Looks good, Jon. Love the glasses on Karolina (something I think a lot of the more recent updates have unfortunately been missing). Can’t wait for part 2.

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